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Addler vas Vacon
« on: May 06, 2010, 08:24:44 PM »
Name: Addler vas Vacon
Age: 27
Race: Human
Alliance: Zarethian Fleet
Biography: Born to militaristic captian in the migrant fleet, Addler had a relatively good childhood, with many friends and supporting family. When he was 7 years old he was sent to the fleet's training ship the Prometheos. There he learned fleet tactics as well as how to control his magical abilities and how to fight and comand ground battles. He and his friend Korvin became inseperable over the years in the academy, but Korvin focussed on commanding fleet ships while Addler focussed on fighting on the ground. He and Korvin once discovered that some iniates were being expiramented upon by a drill instructor to improve higher level functions of the brain for more magical power. He and Korvin were able to get word out and the drill instructor was 'processed' by the authorities. After that incedent he and Korvin where promoted to junior instructors and given commendations by the Admiralty Board. His father than became the main military presence on the board. Addler and Korvin graduated with all honors at the age of 17 and 18 respectivley. Korvin then became the captain of a military frigate and  Addler became a commando and a ground combat Major.
Weapons: Plasma pistol, sword enchated with fire magic, portable laser spiper rifle.
Equipment: Rebreather, medi-pac, datapad, additional ammunition, and a MRS generator inside his armor.
Magic Level: 4 fire magic due to his enchanted sword, but a level 3 normal magic user.
Appearance: Long dark hair, firery red eyes, and pale skin. Usually wears long black robes with his sword at his side. Eyes are slighty slanted with and angular jaw and a mouth that often curves into a smile.
His armor is black and white with red highlights.
« Last Edit: May 09, 2010, 06:23:01 PM by Zak Knight »
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It is in these lonesome times that we reach towards the light sublime
And from that light we pull the resolution of our time
To begin the end and start anew

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Re: Addler Vas Kolar
« Reply #1 on: May 07, 2010, 12:21:35 AM »
Please run your next requests through a spell-checker.

Approved, pending approval of the MRS Generator (assuming it's not already approved.)
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: Addler Vas Kolar
« Reply #2 on: May 07, 2010, 08:03:28 AM »
Great, though why a spell checker? Theres nothing wrong with some of those words. They are 'made-up'.
Liker medi-pac, and rebreather.
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It is in these lonesome times that we reach towards the light sublime
And from that light we pull the resolution of our time
To begin the end and start anew

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Re: Addler Vas Kolar
« Reply #3 on: May 07, 2010, 02:23:56 PM »
There's several spelling and grammar errors in the History field.
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: Addler Vas Kolar
« Reply #4 on: May 07, 2010, 05:00:16 PM »
Approved.
The world is a mess..and I just need to..rule it.

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Re: Addler Vas Kolar
« Reply #5 on: May 09, 2010, 06:22:20 PM »
Crap, didn't realize I used this last name before.... I'm goin' to have to edit it.
There is only so much pain that can be taken before the bonds and chains of sanity are forsaken
It is in these lonesome times that we reach towards the light sublime
And from that light we pull the resolution of our time
To begin the end and start anew

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Re: Addler vas Vacon
« Reply #6 on: February 04, 2011, 09:24:02 PM »
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There is only so much pain that can be taken before the bonds and chains of sanity are forsaken
It is in these lonesome times that we reach towards the light sublime
And from that light we pull the resolution of our time
To begin the end and start anew