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The First
« on: May 19, 2010, 09:09:59 PM »
Name: Pestilence, The First, The Pacifist, Magimeta, and Conquest.
Age: Unknown.
Race: Demi-God, but legends hint at a different nature.
Alliance: Currently neutral in all affairs that do not involve Magimeta.
Biography: Conquest was the first of Koty's sons, his date of birth is unknown but legends say that he was created before the Harbinger or when Koty and Lucifer led the rebellion against God. He like his other brothers followed in his Father's footsteps and performed various actions throughout existence according to the Devil's plans. That was until his Father sent him to destroy and entire realm, the realm was populated by highly-advanced virologists who were currently working on a virus that could eliminate all disease in the entire realm.  "Him" saw this as a threat, but not one that required his attention. So he sent Pestilence to quell the realm. By reducing it to ash.

The First refused, and stood up to his Father. He was obviously struck down by his unsealed Father, who at that time was a God. He was neither killed or locked away, but cursed. If he was to ever kill a living sentient being he'd be instantly be destroyed. And so he became a wandering pacifist, unable to fight back as his Father's minions attacked and destroyed his mortal form over and over again. Legends say that Koty gave him a choice, a way to undo the curse.. If he vows to be loyal once again, the curse would be lifted.

This is where the legends stop, supposedly he disappeared or died. No one really knows.
Weapons: None.
Equipment: None.
Magic Level: 5. 5.5 under special conditions.
Appearance: His appearance has never been verified, but a sketch was created by an artist who supposedly befriended the entity.

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Re: The First
« Reply #1 on: May 19, 2010, 09:14:24 PM »
He seems awfully cheery considering he's Conquest...


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Re: The First
« Reply #2 on: May 19, 2010, 09:17:47 PM »
I say he can't be stronger than the other characters, and forcing him to be a pacifist isn't an excuse for that. Make him the same lvl, then I'll approve.

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Re: The First
« Reply #3 on: May 19, 2010, 09:23:30 PM »
If you read it says legends report. AKA Fucking legends.

Hell in truth he can't even use magic, that's the funny thing. 8D
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Re: The First
« Reply #4 on: May 19, 2010, 09:25:19 PM »
Yes, but you said closest to Koty and God. Even if it's 'legend report,' I know the result that will bring if it's left open. Loophole for later. Not another god. Make him the same lvl.

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Re: The First
« Reply #5 on: May 19, 2010, 09:27:29 PM »
Because he is, or all in all closest thing there is to an Embodiment without being an Embodiment.
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Re: The First
« Reply #6 on: May 19, 2010, 09:28:26 PM »
That wouldn't make him close to God. Lvl 5, or no approval.

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Re: The First
« Reply #7 on: May 19, 2010, 09:29:06 PM »
Level zip. 8D
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Re: The First
« Reply #8 on: May 19, 2010, 09:32:45 PM »
0? Then if that's it, put it. But remove, the close to God's power, part.

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Re: The First
« Reply #9 on: May 19, 2010, 09:34:51 PM »
Nah, because it's true. Magic isn't the only power out there. ;D
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Re: The First
« Reply #10 on: May 19, 2010, 09:37:29 PM »
Can. Not. Be. Close. To. Gods. Power.

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Re: The First
« Reply #11 on: May 19, 2010, 09:39:27 PM »
Suck. My. Dick.

It's funny when she's yelling at me when I'm going to use something CLOSE to God's power.

When's she is literally playing God.
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Re: The First
« Reply #12 on: May 19, 2010, 09:43:06 PM »
Because you already have a god. I know full well what you're trying. By putting that in the lvl, you've opened something unspecified, that you can go back an exploit later, if you need to. Such as the true-names, instead of magic, or such. By having you remove that part, it removes the later exploit. You have one god, too many. This one can't be close to God, and it's possibility left open for exploition.

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Re: The First
« Reply #13 on: May 19, 2010, 09:44:29 PM »
Derp he uses true names, I told you this already.
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Re: The First
« Reply #14 on: May 19, 2010, 09:48:23 PM »
Derp he uses true names, I told you this already.

Which shouldn't be allowed. Because the law of true names in magic. (The usual one,) states that knowing an objects true name, gives you complete control of them, and can even kill them if they choose. I don't know what law of it we're using on here, but the usual one would be godmodding, unless said it can't be used on living beings. But it being used before in the RP, contradicts that. Thus, godmodding. ESPECIALLY, if you say the only thing closest to god.

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Re: The First
« Reply #15 on: May 19, 2010, 09:51:49 PM »
Exxceept he can't kill anyone without blowing himself up and dying instantly.

And the closest thing is basically he's an unaligned Embodiment, he can use true names to gain temporary Control over practically anything if he knows the name. But like Control it's dangerous to use and if it is used it excess he'll die.
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Re: The First
« Reply #16 on: May 19, 2010, 09:53:19 PM »
IF your concept of Control is accepted, first.
Staff debate?
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Re: The First
« Reply #17 on: May 19, 2010, 10:34:28 PM »
She has a point, you know...Your being vauge to get away with loopholes...
Do you have what it takes to change your destiny, to defy FATE itself?
Let us test the limits of your abilities, and see if you have the WILL to do what no one else tries.

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Re: The First
« Reply #18 on: May 19, 2010, 11:11:17 PM »
Loopholes are for lawyer. Kivith, you'd be a really crappy lawyer.
Anyway. Yet another super powerful character for Kivith. Guess I shouldn't be really surprised.

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Re: The First
« Reply #19 on: May 22, 2010, 11:20:02 PM »
Approved.

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Re: The First
« Reply #20 on: May 22, 2010, 11:34:28 PM »
Basically, what Orph's trying to do with this character is metagaming, because of reasons Hik described. Deliberately creating loopholes so you can take advantage of them later is metagaming, as this loophole is OOC knowledge. We need OOC knowledge, if we suspect something, if you want it approved, to be approved.

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Re: The First
« Reply #21 on: May 22, 2010, 11:36:40 PM »
I already told Nisorin and Hikaru it. Hikaru wont approve it until I put in on the template, which I refuse to because fuck that.
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Re: The First
« Reply #22 on: May 22, 2010, 11:38:28 PM »
If they approved it, it would have to be posted here to be official.

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Re: The First
« Reply #23 on: May 22, 2010, 11:39:03 PM »
I already told Nisorin and Hikaru it. Hikaru wont approve it until I put in on the template, which I refuse to because fuck that.
Then guess what?
ITS NOT APPROVED!
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Re: The First
« Reply #24 on: May 22, 2010, 11:40:40 PM »
Depends on what Nisorin said.