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Niiv
« on: April 18, 2012, 04:22:42 AM »
Character Name: Niiv: Tipper of Balance, Bringer of Ruin, Creator of Chaos, Starter of Headaches, Forger of Irony, and Pyro of Maniacs

Age: Ageless! (Okay, really old, but not ageless)

Gender: ...male

Race: Fallen Angel

Appearance: A skinny young man with jet black hair. His Wings are dotted with dazzling green feathers the color of his eyes. They are mostly black, but contently shifting to white. When showing off in his true divine form, he seems to be made up of a black shadow, almost made up of smoke. there seems to be a white light beneath that shadow, pulsing to get fresh air. A few streaks of green light bedazzel his wings.

Alliance: Himself: Anything that can cause disorder

Personality (one paragraph minimum): In this world there are three basic motivations a being can have. The desire for service, the desire for power, and the desire for pleasure. Niv most certainly falls under the third category. Pretty much is only motivation throughout the majority of his life has been to have fun, and how does he do that? Blood, death, and destruction are a good start, although most of the time he settles for something a bit pettier than that. However weather it's tepeeing the White House, or sending a group of Lorcar to the nearest populated planet, he does it all in the spirit of fun!
Niv is a person who you could say is generally happy. He usually has a hysterical smile on his face, and when he has a hysterical smile on his face he is usually hysterically laughing. That is, unless you ruin his fun. Then the expression will become that of offense. Niv is very flamboyant in this way, and you can usually tell how he is feeling by his body language. He's pretty fruity, in an annoying sort of way. He is also a pathological, and honestly a superb, liar. He also has a thing for eavesdropping. Poking into other people's business is something he quite enjoys. If more than about fifty people know a secret, Niv is likely one of them (I promise not to abuse this. If he uses knowledge that seems like something he wouldn't know, I promise to edit or send you a post referencing him in a position where he could learn that knowledge.).

Inventory (Weapons, Equipment, Etc): A steel dirk, a light steel flail, and a big steel crossbow, all of which  with emerald studded hilts. Also a sack of anti matter marbles, each only big enough to cause a meter in diameter blast.

Combat Level: 3
- Magic  Level: 4- He's amazing at laying traps and such, but the quick strikes required in combat? Dream on! The only magic Niv can perform quickly and easily is a teleportation the heck out of there. He also is one of the best creator of falsehoods in the history of the universe. He has crafted some of the most believable lies in existence, and more so, has powers of illusion that can rival even the appropriate embodiments in existence. 
- Physical Strength: 2- It may hurt if he smacks you with his flail, but let's be honest, a ZPAA could break his arm with it's pinky finger. He 's quick and flexible, but honestly don't expect him to be dishing out any real damage to great warriors. Well, at least not with his fists.

Character's History: Niv began his life, forged in the pits of creation, as was every other angel to be created. He was created not to long after Aser, and for a similar purpose. He was to be a partner to Aser, the ideal assistant. A being who was mediocre in combat, and yet clever enough to solve any problem peacefully. The two would create an unstoppable team. Unfortunately, Koty had other plans. Early in the life of Niv, Koty showed up and told him that he would find the work assigned to him quite agitating and stressful. Niv rejected this idea, but the thought stayed with him a long, long time. As he and Aser would become great companions and partners, Niv would realize that there was in fact truth to what Koty had said. The thought plagued him, and after a while he began to loose interest in the mission of he and Aser. A new thought had sprung up. Is it worth it? It was then that Koty came to Niv again, and plagued him with a new idea. Koty convinced Niv to try destruction (not destruction magic, but the act of destroying). After all, what relieves stress more than smashing stuff? Well Niv had sunk so low into his depression that he took little convincing. He destroyed a sign. Nothing big, just a meager sign. However, he realized Koty was right. Destruction was very enjoyable, and before he knew it, the entire city lay in ruin.

Aser was irate when he found out. Guiltridden when realizing what he had done, Niv tried to apologize, but let's be honest, what imperfect being would simply take the apology of someone who had just destroyed a city full of innocents that had been in tedious production for years? Though Aser had been an Angel of good, Aser could not forgive his former friend so easily. He chased Niv three lightyears straight before Niv got away, and even then it was close. However, once Niv did get away, he felt he had no where to go. He spent months sulking in asteroids, hidden from Aser, alone with nothing but his thoughts. As he sat, alone in his asteroid cave, His memory of the city began to fade away as the horrific image of an angry Aser out to kill plagued his thoughts. He had apologized on his hands and knees, tears falling from his eyes, and what did Aser do? Aser tried to kill him. He gave no second chance; showed no mercy of any kind whatsoever! Aser was horrible! How could he treat his great friend that way?

As these thoughts began to enter Niv's mind, the good memories of Aser and himself were pushed to the back of his mind. Before long, he was convinced that he had done the right thing, and Aser was a scoundrel who had always kept a tight reign on Niv. He acted like Aser had enslaved him, and naturally, he turned to his liberator: Koty. He joined Koty, and became a tool of destruction for several centuries. After a while, however, he became bored, and started to drift off: causing chaos in places across the universe that just seemed to serine for him as he passed by. Soon he became more obsessed with this than he was loyal to Koty. Koty saw this happening, but let him go after a while. Niv had become a loose cannon, and he didn't want to keep up with him any longer, but at the same time didn't feel like killing him. Niv has been reeking havoc across the universe ever since.

While most of his horrendous deeds have been seemingly minor scale events, like redirecting the experimental teleportation of a a group of Humans to Pax and watching them beat to death a beautiful Imbellis girl, he has committed crimes on the large scale. Some say he has told every Narrikian leader that attacking that heavily fortified and defensible planet was a good idea. One of the most notable is the Lorcar. Niv has served as a primary informant to the Hive King, giving him information on which planets had a great amount of biomatter for them to consume. If it had sentient life on it beforehand, it's likely that Niv pointed the Lorcar to it. However, to find one of his most proud devastation, we most return to Pax. When coming upon a group of Bellicus traveling throughout space, he decided to have a little fun. He took their already existing ties of magic to emotion, and made them stronger. He made their magic completely dependent on emotion. As a secondary curse to have even better effects, he made the children of these people random and chaotic. Some would live for centuries as a mopey weakling magician, but others would live for only ten years and have three times the capacity for emotion. The results were truly random, but most of the children would be two things: powerful, and uncontrollable. Eventually Aser would take away these cursed Paxan and hide them in a place he though Niv would never find them. As generations of cursed Paxan bred with one another, the curse would stabilize, and they would call themselves Heliphlein. The curse remains in their blood to this day, but  Niv wanted to find them really bad so he could use them as his playthings of chaos even further, but behind the shadow nothing could see what treasures lay in store. However, due to a recent malicious attack, the Aserical shadow was partially burned, and now Niv knows exactly where they are...


Fears: Himself Dying, Aser, dark order, and, though he'd never admit it, his Negi

Orientation: All three ;)

RP Sample (Depending On Combat Level):
http://shatteredplanes.com/forum/index.php?topic=5701.0

Edited: Changed to Niiv because Niv has to much resemblance to New International Version X(
Anyway, for the record, it is pronounced Neev.
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Re: Niv
« Reply #1 on: April 18, 2012, 04:27:34 AM »
So, he's insane?
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Re: Niv
« Reply #2 on: April 18, 2012, 04:32:47 AM »
A bit, yes. He's insane by motivation: he's a very smart, reasonable person, just if you could imagine a sociopath being the middle of the spectrum he's be on the other side.
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Re: Niv
« Reply #3 on: April 18, 2012, 05:41:27 AM »
You want to request him as a demented?

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AMI, city of Sulvian's AI
Insana, the embodiment of Insanity.

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Lt. General Reginald M. Richards- Zarethian TRADOC Commanding General
Father Resulka- Demented Priest
Mother Kilauea Pele- Manic Priestess
Regent, Octavius- Regent of the City of Insania
CDR Tarkov, Zarethian HIRU Agent
High Seraphim, Grunder Tepper- General of the Armies of Heaven
AI, Marathon- DAIS, MI3 Assistant Director
The Giant Golden Dildo on the Sex Planet aka the Embodiment of Sex (Spoof)



"Living in the past is a luxury none of us can afford. We must learn from it, but we cannot live there. It is impossible to plan for the [now]--the present is ever fleeting. [The future] is where we must live--[the future] is what we must plan for. "   -Unknown

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Re: Niv
« Reply #4 on: April 18, 2012, 12:59:10 PM »
Demented?
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Re: Niv
« Reply #5 on: April 18, 2012, 01:19:47 PM »
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Mark Halsey/Tepper II- High Librarian for the Great Records of Time
Lord Capt. Nathan Church- Vampire, Galactic Inc. Executive VP of Security.
Countess, Tera Mikami- Ruler of New Dementia
Admiral, Regis F Hermitage- Dir. Of the Zarethian Hand
Vice Admiral, Lucien Z. Rychart- Pirate Lord [Zealot]/Demented Prince
Antonio Stradivari, Demonic General of the Army of Hell
AMI, city of Sulvian's AI
Insana, the embodiment of Insanity.

My NPCs-
Lt. General Reginald M. Richards- Zarethian TRADOC Commanding General
Father Resulka- Demented Priest
Mother Kilauea Pele- Manic Priestess
Regent, Octavius- Regent of the City of Insania
CDR Tarkov, Zarethian HIRU Agent
High Seraphim, Grunder Tepper- General of the Armies of Heaven
AI, Marathon- DAIS, MI3 Assistant Director
The Giant Golden Dildo on the Sex Planet aka the Embodiment of Sex (Spoof)



"Living in the past is a luxury none of us can afford. We must learn from it, but we cannot live there. It is impossible to plan for the [now]--the present is ever fleeting. [The future] is where we must live--[the future] is what we must plan for. "   -Unknown

"What do you call a cross between a mule, a hornet and a badger? A hikaru." - Hawkeye

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Re: Niv
« Reply #6 on: April 18, 2012, 01:22:06 PM »
Essentially someone blessed by Insane, Embodiment of Insanity.
*already knew of this idea because Nik asked about the Lorcar part and stamps a approval on the character's forehead*
Only thing I wanna be certain of is you DID get permission from UnStellar about the Belkan and Pax stuff, right?
« Last Edit: April 18, 2012, 01:22:46 PM by @Pokemon Master Red »
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Re: Niv
« Reply #7 on: April 18, 2012, 01:58:06 PM »
Well, the Belkans are mine. I'm not sure that i ever requested a Paxon besides Halsey, and his sis (which KoL approved).
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Lord Capt. Nathan Church- Vampire, Galactic Inc. Executive VP of Security.
Countess, Tera Mikami- Ruler of New Dementia
Admiral, Regis F Hermitage- Dir. Of the Zarethian Hand
Vice Admiral, Lucien Z. Rychart- Pirate Lord [Zealot]/Demented Prince
Antonio Stradivari, Demonic General of the Army of Hell
AMI, city of Sulvian's AI
Insana, the embodiment of Insanity.

My NPCs-
Lt. General Reginald M. Richards- Zarethian TRADOC Commanding General
Father Resulka- Demented Priest
Mother Kilauea Pele- Manic Priestess
Regent, Octavius- Regent of the City of Insania
CDR Tarkov, Zarethian HIRU Agent
High Seraphim, Grunder Tepper- General of the Armies of Heaven
AI, Marathon- DAIS, MI3 Assistant Director
The Giant Golden Dildo on the Sex Planet aka the Embodiment of Sex (Spoof)



"Living in the past is a luxury none of us can afford. We must learn from it, but we cannot live there. It is impossible to plan for the [now]--the present is ever fleeting. [The future] is where we must live--[the future] is what we must plan for. "   -Unknown

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Re: Niv
« Reply #8 on: April 18, 2012, 02:17:50 PM »
Rightright, wrong term I think. Term I was looking for was Bellicus, which IS Paxan(its mentioned in this character's Bio, and a fairly important part which is why I'm asking).
« Last Edit: April 18, 2012, 02:18:23 PM by @Pokemon Master Red »
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Re: Niv
« Reply #9 on: April 18, 2012, 02:20:20 PM »
My bad. Thought that question was directed towards me.
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Mark Halsey/Tepper II- High Librarian for the Great Records of Time
Lord Capt. Nathan Church- Vampire, Galactic Inc. Executive VP of Security.
Countess, Tera Mikami- Ruler of New Dementia
Admiral, Regis F Hermitage- Dir. Of the Zarethian Hand
Vice Admiral, Lucien Z. Rychart- Pirate Lord [Zealot]/Demented Prince
Antonio Stradivari, Demonic General of the Army of Hell
AMI, city of Sulvian's AI
Insana, the embodiment of Insanity.

My NPCs-
Lt. General Reginald M. Richards- Zarethian TRADOC Commanding General
Father Resulka- Demented Priest
Mother Kilauea Pele- Manic Priestess
Regent, Octavius- Regent of the City of Insania
CDR Tarkov, Zarethian HIRU Agent
High Seraphim, Grunder Tepper- General of the Armies of Heaven
AI, Marathon- DAIS, MI3 Assistant Director
The Giant Golden Dildo on the Sex Planet aka the Embodiment of Sex (Spoof)



"Living in the past is a luxury none of us can afford. We must learn from it, but we cannot live there. It is impossible to plan for the [now]--the present is ever fleeting. [The future] is where we must live--[the future] is what we must plan for. "   -Unknown

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Re: Niv
« Reply #10 on: April 18, 2012, 02:28:50 PM »
Nah, if it were I wouldn't use someone else's request topic for it.
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Re: Niv
« Reply #11 on: April 18, 2012, 03:52:44 PM »
Please PM before involving a character of mine in your backstory. I gotta approve it remember?

But yeah; that would work. No problem with it.
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Re: Niv
« Reply #12 on: April 19, 2012, 12:19:14 PM »
Elaborate on the spirit speaking power.

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Re: Niv
« Reply #13 on: April 19, 2012, 01:18:36 PM »
Sorry. I had no idea who owned Koty and thought I could use him if I just PM'd staff. I asked Unstellar a while ago, but I added this bit later and am not quite sure if he approved it or not.

While most of his horrendous deeds have been seemingly minor scale events, like redirecting the experimental teleportation of a a group of Humans to Pax and watching them beat to death a beautiful Imbellis girl, he has committed crimes on the large scale.
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« Reply #14 on: April 19, 2012, 01:46:37 PM »
An extension of empathy, or sympathy. He can do anything, just making your spirit see it directly, which makes it seem more real. If he tells you a lie most of the situation won't immediately factor in, and it'll be easier to tell you the lie. However when he creates an illusion of some sort, an pushes it with this power, he can make someone truly believe what's going on unless they know he's pushing them.
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Re: Niv
« Reply #15 on: April 20, 2012, 05:06:48 PM »
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« Reply #16 on: April 27, 2012, 12:26:32 AM »
I still need more information. What do you mean the spirit see it directly? The spirit is what sees things ANYWAYS, the body being just a doll.

And making someone believe a lie or believe an illusion would be character control. You can say have it be 'suggested,' more, but not auto-hit believe.

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« Reply #17 on: April 27, 2012, 06:16:17 PM »
Lie, yes. I mostly have that in there for character reasoning: I don't think it'll ever be something I can use without cheating. Illusions on the other hand are completely in my rights to use. I mean, they can refute it, but they have to give really good reasoning to do it and actually use my words. It would be just as wrong for someone to make up something about the illusion IC.

I mean essentially that the character side sees it directly. The persona sees it directly. It is seen and naturally put as truth unless something else come up that could break the ideal of its truth.
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« Reply #18 on: May 30, 2012, 10:19:33 PM »
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« Reply #19 on: May 31, 2012, 08:18:36 PM »
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Re: Niv
« Reply #20 on: June 01, 2012, 12:14:35 AM »
Illusions anyone can use. To say that they're tricked into believing them would fall under character control, same as lies. The power is godmodding.
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« Reply #21 on: June 01, 2012, 12:40:56 AM »
Dude. Hik, it may help if you actually read my post. I never said I'd say they were tricked into believing it. I specifically said the player can refute it, but they have to have a good reason to.

Lie, yes. I mostly have that in there for character reasoning: I don't think it'll ever be something I can use without cheating. Illusions on the other hand are completely in my rights to use. I mean, they can refute it, but they have to give really good reasoning to do it and actually use my words. It would be just as wrong for someone to make up something about the illusion IC.

I mean essentially that the character side sees it directly. The persona sees it directly. It is seen and naturally put as truth unless something else come up that could break the ideal of its truth.

I have a very clear strategy worked out in my mind of how this will work, and it is full within my rights and rule to use it. My explanation of how it works is an explanation of the gravitas in which it bears. I'll play by the rules, but these are in fact really freaking good illusions. Even if someone doesn't believe it's real dozens of bugs crawling all over you screaming horrible screeches will still have an effect.


Essentially, this entire post of yours is you putting words in my mouth:
Illusions anyone can use. To say that they're tricked into believing them would fall under character control, same as lies. The power is godmodding.

The power is not godmodding, and you admitted it yourself when you said "Illusions anyone can use."
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« Reply #22 on: June 01, 2012, 01:09:51 AM »
You said it yourself that it influences them to believe it more in your request.  If you have a better explanation in your mind of how it works then for it to be approved, give a sample here, sample post or something. It's in your full rights, yes. But not if it fucks with the Spirit like you said in your request.

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« Reply #23 on: June 01, 2012, 05:21:57 PM »
Which is better, saying it is good or explaining why it is good? The explanation is mainly for characterization. I don't have the ability to just say what others believe, and I don't have the power to fuck with spirit. I never said that. Even if I did come up with a better explanation there is no way you'd let it be approved. You'd find some minor fault, or put some minor fault in the to the mix so that you could keep this from approval. Stop putting words in my mouth.
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« Reply #24 on: June 19, 2012, 05:02:13 PM »
Skrew you for your close mindedness. Edited.
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